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model: jackie

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:iconlady-tori:
I like the black and white.

As for critique, the focus seems to lay on the fringe/hair, the focus should be on the eyes, after all, they say the eyes are the key to the soul. I think it's a bit over-exposed at the bottom of the picture as well. Also, I think you should try sharpening it; it does wonders to the pic. :D

Overall, I like the picture.
:iconpaperslayer:
Thats a nice image! Beautiful model!! :clap:

(is it me or does it seem soft?)

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I like her expression here :)

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June 21
146 KB
146 KB
670×449

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Camera Data

NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D60
1/1000 second
F/2.2
50 mm
200
May 23, 2009, 3:36:03 PM

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